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Fed on  diet of nutrients, dew drops and sun rays
The pink blooms are resplendent on the magnolia trees
Let me get lost in the labyrinth of your gaze
And pass through the portal to sail the open seas.

Notes: NaPoWriMo 2013 Day 15  prompt was to write a pantun, a Malay form quatrain with an ABAB rhyme. The last 2 lines could make an associative leap from the first 2 lines.


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